Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Freedom

This is a poem I wrote a couple nights ago. It's also an inspiration to a story that I've started writing :) Enjoy, and please let me know what you think. I need constructive critism...

Freedom-

I've got chains up&down my wrists,
No I aint in jail,
Ima free female,
Free to speak,
Free to love,
Free to always be myself,
Why the chains?
Why the restraints?
Ask yourself,
You're capturing my heart&my health,
Baby, I'm trapped in the freedom of your love,
Yes, it makes sense,
Just pay attention,
Look at us,
It's true,
I'll always want just you,
You're my guard,
You have the key,
Either unlock them,
Or keep hold of me,
It's a simple choice,
All you have to choose,
Is the hell of the world,
Or the heaven of freedom in love,
We'll soon be let loose,
I've got chains up&down my wrists,
No I aint in jail,
Ima free female...

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